Your Script Is GREAT...
So Why Is No One Reading It?

Get logline evaluations in minutes, and stop wondering why nobody's requesting your work.

I got a read request! A huge tip - WRITE YOUR LOGLINE FIRST!!
Dean Ferdinands
Screenwriter

Does this sound like you?

You know your script is solid.
The problem is getting anyone to actually read it.

  • You’ve sent out dozens (maybe hundreds) of queries and gotten nothing but silence or form rejections.
  • You’ve rewritten your logline twenty times, posted it in Facebook groups and Reddit forums, and gotten conflicting advice from people who think they know.
  • You suspect your concept might have issues, but you’ve already written 100+ pages. The thought of starting over makes you feel ill.
  • You’re tired of being treated like an amateur when you’re putting in professional-level work.
 

…you’re not alone.

Here's what nobody tells you...

Hollywood reads loglines, not scripts.

Executives, producers, managers, agents… they’re all drowning in submissions. Your logline is the only tool you have to make them care enough to request your script. That’s it. That’s the whole game.

A bad logline means your script never gets read.

Period.

Doesn’t matter how good the script is.

A great logline doesn’t guarantee success (I can’t control what producers want or which projects they’re already developing), but here’s what I do know after fifteen years of teaching screenwriting and getting read requests for myself and for my students:

Every script that gets read starts with a logline that works.

Not every great logline gets a read request, but every read request happened because of a great logline. It’s necessary.

No. It’s critical.

And if your logline isn’t pulling its weight, you’re sabotaging yourself before anyone even sees page one.

The Logline Evaluator gives you the same analysis I’ve been giving my students for over a decade. The writers I work with who follow this process get more read requests.

I got a read request for my script after refining my logline to near perfection.
Tracie Yake
Screenwriter

How the Logline Evaluator Works

Simple. Fast. Effective.

Step 1: Submit Your Logline

Enter your logline information into the evaluator. Takes a few seconds.

Step 2: Get Professional Analysis

The AI has been trained on my teaching methods (fifteen years teaching screenwriting, countless loglines critiqued, real read requests generated). You get a detailed evaluation that tells you exactly what’s working and what’s not.

Step 3: Revise and Resubmit

Use the feedback to strengthen your logline. Submit again. Keep refining until it’s bulletproof.

Step 4: Get Read Requests

Once your logline works, it works. Use it in queries, contests, everywhere.

Stop guessing. Start knowing.

This isn’t magic.

It’s method.

The same method that’s been getting my students results for years.

A script I've been working on for years was jumbled, and disjointed, and going nowhere but the trash bin. I reworked the logline and ended up with a coherent idea and a direction to follow. My total wreck is now on its way to being a valid script because I made sure the logline was as perfect as I could get.
Bradly Stott
Screenwriter
Jacob provides 'actionable intelligence' on how to produce a script that has a fighting chance of getting recommended and produced.
Dave Wright
Screenwriter

Stop wasting time on scripts nobody will read.

The Logline Evaluator helps you figure out if your concept is marketable BEFORE you spend months writing a script. If the logline doesn’t work, the script won’t either. Why write 100 pages for nothing?

Get Clarity When You’re Starting

Stuck in the idea phase? The evaluator helps you sharpen your concept, identify what’s compelling, and spot problems early. Better to know now than after you’ve written the whole thing.

Professional Feedback Without the Wait

No more posting in forums and getting fifteen different opinions from people who think a logline is no more than a Netflix summary. No more waiting weeks (or months) for a consultant who may or may not get what you’re trying to do. Get analysis in minutes that’s based on what actually works.

Unlimited Revisions

Query letters get one shot. Loglines don’t. Revise as many times as you need until it’s right. Test different versions. Experiment. Find what works.

Confidence When You Hit Send

Stop second-guessing yourself every time you send a query. Know your logline is strong. Know it’s doing its job. Know you’re giving your script the best possible chance.

Three Subscription Tiers to Fit Your Needs

All plans include the same professional-level analysis.

And you get unlimited evaluations during your subscription.

You can manage your subscription to upgrade or cancel any time.

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Jacob has helped me flesh out an idea into something viable before dedicating months to the writing process. This has also helped me significantly reduce the time it takes from idea generation to a final, polished draft I can do something with.
Charlie Ricottone
screenwriter

Your Script Deserves to Be Read

You’ve put in the work. You’ve written the pages. You’ve rewritten them.

Don’t let a weak logline be the reason nobody sees what you’ve created.

The Logline Evaluator gives you the same analysis that’s been getting read requests for my students for over a decade. It’s fast, it’s clear, and it works.

Stop guessing. Start knowing.

Create your account, choose your plan, and start getting logline evaluations in the next five minutes.

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